MAKING WILLY
LOMAN

Fifty years ago, Arthur Miller took American theatre into
new territory. A look at his personal notebook reveals how he did it.
By John Lahr
Originally published in The New Yorker.
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On a crisp April weekend in 1948, Arthur Miller, then only thirty-three
and enjoying the first flush of fame after the Broadway success the previous
year of All My Sons, waved goodbye to his first wife, Mary, and their two
young kids, in Brooklyn, and set off for Roxbury, Connecticut, where he
intended to build a cabin on a hillock just behind a Colonial house he had
recently purchased for the family, which stood at the aptly named crossroads
of Tophet (another name for Hell) and Gold Mine. "It was a purely
instinctive act," Miller, who long ago traded up from that first
forty-four-acre-property to a four-hundred-acre spread on Painter Hill, a
few miles down the road, told me recently. ''I had never built a building in
my life."
Miller had a play in mind, too; his impulse for the cabin was "to sit in
the middle of it, and shut the door, and let things happen." All Miller knew
about his new play was that it would be centered on a travelling salesman
who would die at the end and that two of the lines were "Willy?" "It's all
right. I came back" - words that to Miller spoke "the whole disaster in a
nutshell." He says, ''I mean, imagine a salesman who can't get past Yonkers.
It's the end of the world. It's like an actor saying 'It's all right. I
can't speak.' " As he worked away on his cabin, he repeated the play's two
lines like a kind of mantra. ''I kept saying, 'As soon as I get the roof on
and the windows in, I’m gonna start this thing,' " he recalls. "And I indeed
I started on a morning in spring. Everything was starting to bud. Beautiful
weather."
Miller had fashioned a desk out of an old door. As he sat down to it his
tools and nails were still stashed in a corner of the studio, which was as
yet unpainted and smelled of raw wood. ''I started in the morning, went
through the day, then had dinner, and then I went back there and worked till
- I don't know - one or two o'clock in the morning," he says. "It sort of
unveiled itself. I was the stenographer. I could hear them. I could hear
them, literally." When Miller finally lay down to sleep that first night, he
realized he'd been crying. "My eyes still burned and my throat was sore from
talking it all out and shouting and laughing," he later wrote in his
autobiography, "Timebends." In one day, he had produced, almost intact, the
first act of Death of a Salesman, which has since sold about eleven million
copies, making it probably the most successful modern play ever published.
The show, which is being put on somewhere in the world almost every day of
the year, celebrates its fiftieth anniversary next month with a Broadway
revival from Chicago's Goodman Theatre, directed by Robert Falls and
starring Brian Dennehy as the fanatical and frazzled drummer Willy Loman.
"He didn't write Death of a Salesman; he re/eased it," the play's
original director, Elia Kazan, said in his auto biography, "A Life." "It was
there inside him, stored up waiting to be turned loose." To Miller, there
was a "dream's quality in my memory of the writing and the day or two that
followed its completion." In his notebook for Death of a Salesman – a
sixty-six page document chronicling the play's creation, which is kept with
his papers at the University of Texas at Austin - he wrote, "He who
understands everything about his subject cannot write it. I write as much to
discover as to explain." After that first day of inspiration, it took Miller
six weeks to call forth the second act and to make Willy remember enough "so
he would kill himself." The form of the play - where past and present
coalesce in a lyrical dramatic arc - was one that Miller felt he'd been
"searching for since the beginning of my writing life." Death of a Salesman
seems to spill out of Willy's panic- stricken, protean imagination, and not
out of a playwright's detached viewpoint. "The play is written from the
sidewalk instead of from a skyscraper," Miller says of its first-person
urgency. But, ironically, it was from the deck of a skyscraper that Miller
contemplated beginning his drama, in a kind of Shakespearean foreshadowing
of Willy's suicidal delirium. The notebook's first entry reads:
Scene l - Atop Empire State. 2 guards. "Who will die today? It's that
kind of day. . . fog, and poor visibility. They like to jump into a cloud.
Who will it be today?"
As Miller navigated his way through the rush of characters and plot
ideas, the notebook acted as ballast. "In every scene remember his size,
ugliness," Miller reminds himself about Loman on its second page. "Remember
his own attitude. Remember pity." He analyzes his characters' motives.
"Willy wants his sons to destroy his failure," he writes, and on a later
page, "Willy resents Linda's unbroken, patient forgiveness (knowing there
must be great hidden hatred for him in her heart)." In Miller's notebook,
characters emerge sound and fully formed. For instance, of Willy's idealized
elder son, Biff, who is a lost soul fallen from his high-school glory and
full of hate for his father, he writes, "Biff is travelled, oppressed by
guilt of failure, of not making money although a kind of indolence pleases
him: an easygoing way of life…Truthfully, Biff is not really bright enough
to make a businessman. Wants everything too fast." Miller also talks to
himself about the emotional stakes and the trajectory of scenes:
Have it happen that Willy’s life is in Biff's hands - aside from
succeeding. There is Willy's guilt to Biff re: The Woman. But is that
retrievable? There is Biff's disdain for Willy's character, his false aims,
his pretense and these Biff cannot finally give up or alter. Discover the
link between Biff’s work views and his anti-work feelings.
Although the notebook begins with a series of choppy asides and outlines,
it soon becomes an expansive, exact handwritten log of Miller's contact with
his inner voices. For instance, it reveals the development of Charley,
Loman's benevolent next-door neighbor, whose laconic evenhandedness was, in
Miller's eyes, partly a projection of his own father. Charley speaks
poignantly to Biff at Willy's graveside ("Nobody dast blame this man"); what
appears in the last scene as a taut and memorable nine-line speech, a kind
of eulogy, was mined from words (here indicated in italics) that were part
of a much longer improvisation in the notebook:
A salesman doesn't build anything, he don’t put a bolt to a nut or a seed
in the ground. A man who doesn't build anything must be liked. He must he
cheerful on bad days. Even calamities mustn't break through. Cause one
thing, he has got to be liked. He don't tell you the law or give you
medicine. So there's no rock bottom to your life. All you know is that on
good days or bad, you gotta come in cheerful. No calamity must be permitted
to break through, Cause one thing, always, you’re a man who’s gotta be
believed. You’re way out there riding on a smile and a shoeshine. And when
they start not smilin' back, the sky falls in. And then you get a couple of
spots on your hat, and you're finished. Cause there’s no rock bottom to your
life.
Here, as in all his notes for the play, Miller's passion and his flow are
apparent in the surprising absence of cross-outs; the pages exude a
startling alertness. He is listening not just to the voices of his
characters but to the charmed country silence around him, which seems to
define his creative state of grace:
Roxbury - At night the insects softly thumping the screens like a blind
man pushing with his fingers in the dark . . . The crickets, frogs,
whippoorwills altogether, a scream from the breast of the earth when
everyone is gone. The evening sky, faded gray, like the sea pressing up
against the windows, or an opaque gray screen. (Through which someone is
looking in at me?)
On a bright-blue December afternoon last year, Miller, now eighty-three,
returned to the cabin with his third wife, the photographer Inge Morath.
Although she has lived with Miller for more than three decades, only one
mile away from the "Salesman" studio, she had never seen the place. "The
main house was occupied by people I didn't know. They were sort of engineer
people. Very antipathetic," Miller said, swinging his red Volkswagen into
the driveway of the new, friendly writer-owners. In a tan windbreaker and a
baseball cap, he looked as rough-hewn and handy as any local farmer. (The
dining room tables and chairs in his current, cluttered 1782 farmhouse are
Miller's handiwork, produced in his carpentry workshop.) After a cursory
inspection of his old home, Miller, who is six feet three and stoops a
little now, set off toward the cabin, up a steep hump that sits a few
hundred paces from the back of the house. "In those days, I didn't think
this hill was quite as steep," he said.
The cabin, a white clapboard construction in somewhat urgent need of a
new coat of paint, stood just over the top of the rise, facing west, toward
a thicket of birch trees and a field. "Oh, it will last as long as it's
painted," Miller said, inspecting what he had wrought. "See, if a building
has a sound roof, that's it, you'll keep it."
"I didn't know it was so tiny," Morath said. She snapped off a few
photos, then waved her husband into the foreground for a picture before we
all crowded into what proved to be a single high-ceilinged room. Except for
a newly installed fluorescent light and some red linoleum that had been
fitted over the floorboards, what Miller saw was what he'd built. He stepped
outside to see if the cabin had been wired for electricity. (It had.) He
inspected the three cinder blocks on which it was securely perched against
the side of the hill. ''I did the concrete," he recalled. Leaving, he turned
to take a last look. "I learned a lot doing it," he said. "The big problem
was getting the rafters of the roof up there alone. I finally built it on
the ground and then swung them up." He added, "It's a bit like playwriting,
you know. You get to a certain point, you gotta squeeze your way out of it."
Where does the alchemy of a great play begin? The seeds of Death of a
Salesman were planted decades before Miller stepped into his cabin. "Selling
was in the air through my boyhood," says Miller, whose father, Isidore, was
the salesman-turned-owner of the Miltex Coat and Suit Company, which was a
thriving enough business to provide the family with a spacious apartment on
110th Street in Harlem, a country bungalow, and a limousine and driver. "The
whole idea of selling successfully was very important." Just as Miller was
entering his teens, however, his father's business was wiped out by the
Depression. Isidore's response was silence and sleep ("My father had trouble
staying awake"); his son's response was anger. ''I had never raised my voice
against my father, nor did he against me, then or ever," wrote Miller, who
had to postpone going to college for two years - until 1934 - because
"nobody was in possession of the fare." "As I knew perfectly well, it was
not he who angered me, only his failure to cope with his fortune's
collapse," Miller went on in his autobiography. "Thus I had two fathers, the
real one and the metaphoric, and the latter I resented because he did not
know how to win out over the general collapse."
Death of a Salesman is a lightning rod both for a father's bewilderment
("What's the secret?" Willy asks various characters) and for a son's fury at
parental powerlessness ("You fake! You phony little fake!" Biff tells Willy
when they finally square off, in Act II). After the play's success, Miller's
mother, Augusta, found an early manuscript called "In Memoriam," a forgotten
autobiographical fragment that Miller had written when he was about
seventeen. The piece, which was published in these pages in 1995, is about a
Miltex salesman called Schoenzeit, who had once asked Miller for subway fare
when Miller was helping him carry samples to an uptown buyer. The real
Schoenzeit killed himself the next day by throwing himself in front of the
El train; the character's "dejected soul"- a case of exhaustion masquerading
as gaiety - is the first sighting of what would become Willy Loman. "His
emotions were displayed at the wrong times always, and he knew when to
laugh," Miller wrote. In 1952, Miller, rummaging through his papers, found a
1937 notebook in which he had made embryonic sketches of Willy, Biff, and
Willy's second son, Happy. "It was the same family," he says of the twenty
pages of realistic dialogue. "But I was unable in that straightforward,
realistic form to contain what I thought of as the man's poetry - that is,
the zigzag shots of his mind." He adds, ''I blotted it out."
Every masterpiece is a story of accident and accomplishment. Of all the
historical and personal forces that fed the making of Death of a Salesman,
none was more important than a moment in 1947 when Miller's uncle Manny
Newman accosted him in the lobby of the Colonial Theatre in Boston after a
matinee of All My Sons. "People regarded him as a kind of strange,
completely untruthful personality," Miller says of Newman, a salesman and a
notorious fabulist, who within the year would commit suicide. ''I thought of
him as a kind of wonderful inventor. There was something in him which was
terribly moving, because his suffering was right on his skin, you see. He
was the ultimate climber up the ladder who was constantly being stepped on
by those climbing past him. My empathy for him was immense. I mean, how
could he possibly have succeeded? There was no way." According to Miller,
Newman was "cute and ugly, a bantam with a lisp. Very charming." He and his
family, including two sons, Abby and Buddy, lived modestly in Brooklyn. "It
was a house without irony, trembling with resolutions and shouts of
victories that had not yet taken place but surely would tomorrow," Miller
recalled in "Timebends." Newman was fiercely, wackily competitive; even when
Miller was a child, in the few hours he spent in Newman's presence his uncle
drew him into some kind of imaginary contest "which never stopped in his
mind." Miller, who was ungainly as a boy, was often compared unfavorably
with his cousins, and whenever he visited them, he said, ''I always had to
expect some kind of insinuation of my entire life's probable failure."
When Newman approached Miller after that matinee, he had not seen his
nephew for more than a decade. He had tears in his eyes, but instead of
complimenting the playwright, he told Miller, "Buddy is doing very well."
Miller says now, "He had simply picked up the conversation from fifteen
years before. That element of competitiveness - his son competing with me -
was so alive in his head that there was no gate to keep it from his mouth.
He was living in two places at the same time." Miller continues, "So
everything is in the present. For him to say 'Buddy is doing very well' -
there are no boundaries. It's all now. It's all now. And that to me was
wonderful."
At the time, Miller was absorbed in the tryout of All My Sons and had
"not the slightest interest in writing about a salesman." Until All My Sons,
Miller's plays had not been naturalistic in style; he had "resolved to write
a play that could be put on," and had "put two years into All My Sons to be
sure that I believed every page of it." But Miller found naturalism, with
its chronological exposition, "not sensuous enough" as a style; he began to
imagine a kind of play where, as in Greek drama, issues were confronted head
on, and where the transitions between scenes were pointed rather than
disguised. The success of All My Sons emboldened him. ''I could now move
into unknown territory," Miller says. "And that unknown territory was
basically that we're thinking on several planes at the same time. I wanted
to find a way to try to make everything happen at once." In his introduction
to the fiftieth anniversary edition of Death of a Salesman, Miller writes,
"The play had to move forward not by following a narrow discreet line, but
as a phalanx." He continues, "There was no model I could adapt for this
play, no past history for the kind of work I felt it could become." The
notebook for the play shows Miller formulating a philosophy for the kind of
Cubist stage pictures that would become his new style:
Life is formless - its interconnections are cancelled by lapses of time,
by events occurring in separate places, by the hiatus of memory. We live in
the world made by man and the past. Art suggests or makes the
interconnection palpable. Form is the tension of these interconnections: man
with man, man with the past and present environment. The drama at its best
is a mass experience of this tension.
At first, the Manny Newman encounter inspired in Miller only the
intimation of a new, slashing sense of dramatic form. The play's structure
is embedded in the structure of Loman's turbulent mind, which, Miller says,
destroys the boundaries between then and now. As a result, "there are no
flashbacks, strictly speaking, in Death of a Salesman, " he says. "It's
always moving forward." In this way, Miller jettisoned what he calls "the
daylight continuity" of naturalism for the more fluid dark logic of dreams.
"In a dream you don't have transitional material," Miller says. "The dream
starts where it starts to mean something." He continues, ''I wanted to start
every scene at the last possible instant, no matter where that instant
happened to be." He picked up a copy of his play and read me its first
beats: " 'Willy?' 'It's all right. I came back.' 'Why? What happened? Did
something happen, Willy?' 'No, nothing happened.' " He added, "We're into
the thing in three lines." His new structure jump-started both the scenes
and the stage language, whose intensity Miller called "emergency speech" -
an "unashamedly open" idiom that replaced "the crabbed dramatic hints and
pretexts of the natural." Willy dies without a secret; the play's structure,
with its crosscutting between heightened moments, encouraged the idea of
revelation. The audience response that Miller wanted to incite, he said,
"was not 'What happens next and why?' so much as 'Oh, God, of course.'"
When, early in 1948, Miller visited his cousin Abby Newman to talk about
the blighted life of his late father, Miller himself had just such an
epiphany. Newman told Miller, "He wanted a business for us. So we could all
work together. A business for the boys." Miller, who repeated Newman's words
in the play, wrote in his autobiography, "This conventional, mundane wish
was a shot of electricity that switched all the random iron filings in my
mind in one direction. A hopelessly, distracted Manny was transformed into a
man with a purpose: he had been trying to make a gift that would crown all
those striving years; all those lies he told, all his imaginings and crazy
exaggerations, even the almost military discipline he had laid on his boys,
were in this instant given form and point. I suddenly understood him with my
very blood."
Willy Loman is a salesman, but we're never told what product he lugs
around in his two large sample cases. Once, a theatregoer buttonholed Miller
and put the question to him: "What's he selling? You never say what he's
selling." Miller quipped, "Well, himself. That's who's in the valise."
Miller adds, "You sell yourself. You sell the goods. You become the
commodity." Willy's house echoes with exhortations to his two floundering
sons about the presentation of self ("The man who creates personal interest
is the man who gets ahead. Be liked and you will never want") and the
imperialism of self ("Lick the world. You guys together could absolutely
lick the civilized world"). In his notebook Miller writes, "Willy longs to
take off, be great," and "Willy wants his boys prepared for any life.
'Nobody will laugh at them - take advantage. They'll be big men.' It's the
big men who command respect." In Willy's frenzied and exhausted attempt to
claim himself, Miller had stumbled onto a metaphor for a postwar society's
eagerness to pursue its self-interest after years of postponed life. In
Willy's desperate appetite for success and in the brutal dicta offered by
his rich brother Ben ("Never fight fair with a stranger, boy.You'll never
get out of the jungle that way") Death of a Salesman caught the spirit of
self-aggrandizement being fed by what Miller calls "the biggest boom in the
history of the world." Americans had struggled through the Depression, then
fought a world war to keep the nation's democratic dream alive; that dream
was, broadly speaking, a dream of self-realization. America, with its ideal
of freedom, challenged its citizens to see how far they could go in a
lifetime - "to end up big," as Willy says. (In the play, Ben, whom Willy
looks to for answers - the notebook points to him as "the visible evidence
of what the boys can do and be. Superior family" - is literally the
predatory imperialist who at seventeen walked into the African jungle and
emerged four years later as a millionaire.) Miller was not the first to
dramatize the barbarity of American individualism; but, in a shift that
signalled the changing cultural mood, he was the first to stage this
spiritual battle of attrition as a journey to the interior of the American
psyche. "In a certain sense, Willy is all the voices," Miller said later. In
fact, "The Inside of His Head" was Miller's first title for the play; he
also briefly toyed with the idea of having the proscenium designed in the
shape of a head and having the action take place inside it.
In the economic upheavals of the thirties, social realism reflected the
country's mood; plays held a mirror up to the external world, not an
internal one. But in the postwar boom Tennessee Williams's The Glass
Menagerie (1945) and A Streetcar Named Desire (1947), written in what
Williams called his "personal lyricism," suddenly an audience and struck a
new chord in American life. The plays were subjective, poetic, the self, not
of social remedies. Indeed, the name "Willy Loman" was not intended by
Miller as a sort of socioeconomic indicator ("low man"). Miller took it from
a chilling moment in Fritz Lang's film "The Testament of Dr. Mabuse" (1933)
when, after a long and terrifying stakeout, a disgraced detective who thinks
he can redeem himself by exposing a gang forgers is pursued and duped by
them. The chase ends with the detective on the phone to his former boss ("Loh-
mann? Help me, for God's sake! Loh- mann!"); when we see him next, he is in
an asylum, gowned and frightened and shouting into an invisible phone ("Lohmann?
Lohmann? Lohmann?"). "What the name really meant to me was a terrified man
calling into the void for help that will never come," Miller said.
Willy Loman's particular terror goes to the core of American
individualism, in which the reputable self and the issue of wealth are
hopelessly tangled. "A man can't go out the way he came in," Willy says to
Ben. '"A man has got to add up to something." Willy, who, at sixty, has no
job, no money, no loyalty from his boys, is sensationally lacking in assets
and in their social corollary - a sense of blessing. "He envies those who
are blessed; he feels unblessed, but he's striving for it," Miller says.
Although Willy's wife, Linda, famously says of him that "attention must be
paid," he feels invisible to the world. "I'm not noticed," he says. Later,
Linda confides to the boys, "For five weeks he's been on straight
commission, like a beginner, an unknown!" As Miller puts it now, "The whole
idea of people failing with us is that they can no longer be loved. You
haven't created a persona which people will pay for, see, experience, or
come close to. It's almost like death. You have a deathly touch. People who
succeed are loved because they exude some magical formula for fending off
destruction, fending off death." He continues, "It's the most brutal way of
looking at life that one can imagine, because it discards anyone who does
not measure up. It wants to destroy them. It's been going on since the
Puritan times. You are beyond the blessing of God. You're beyond the reach
of God. That God rewards those who deserve it. It's a moral condemnation
that goes on. You don't want to be near this failure."
Death of a Salesman was the first play to dramatize this punishing - and
particularly American - interplay of panic and achievement. Before Salesman,
Eugene O'Neill's The Iceman Cometh (1946) raised the issue in the eerie calm
of Harry Hope's bar, whose sodden habitues have retreated from
competitiveness into a perverse contentment; as one of the characters says,
"No one here has to worry about where they're going next, because there is
no farther they can go." But in Willy Loman, Miller was able to bring both
the desperation and the aspiration of American life together in one
character.
Willy is afflicted by the notion of winning - what Brecht called "the
black addiction of the brain." He cheats at cards; he encourages his boys to
seek every advantage. Victory haunts him and his feckless sons. In a scene
from the notebook, Biff and Happy tell Willy of their plan to go into
business. "Step on it, boys, there ain't a minute to lose," Willy tells
them, but their souls are strangled by their father's heroic dreams, which
hang over them like some sort of spiritual kudzu. In another notebook entry,
Biff rounds fiercely on Willy: "I don't care if you live or die. You think
I'm mad at you because of the Woman, don't you? I am, but I'm madder because
you botched up my life, because I can't tear you out of my heart, because I
keep trying to make good, be something for you, to succeed for you."
In dramatizing the fantasy of competition, Miller's play was the first to
dissect cultural envy in action - that process of invidious comparison which
drives society forward but also drives it crazy. "You lose your life to it!"
Miller says of the envy that feeds Willy's restlessness. "It's the ultimate
outer-directional emotion. In other words, I am doing this not because it's
flowing from me but because it's flowing against him." He goes on, "You're
living in a mirror. It's a life of reflections. Emptiness. Emptiness.
Emptiness. Hard to go to sleep at night. And hard to wake up." In his mind,
Willy is competing with his brother Ben; with Dave Singleman, a successful
old salesman who could make a living "without ever leaving his room" and who
died a placid, accomplished death on a train to Boston; with his neighbor
Charley, who owns his own business; and with Charley's successful lawyer
son, Bernard. "Where's Willy in all this?" Miller asks. "He's competed
himself to death. He's not existing anymore, or hardly."
In his notebook Miller wrote, "It is the combination of guilt (of
failure), hate, and love - all in conflict that he resolves by
'accomplishing' a 20,000 dollar death." In death, Willy is worth more than
in life. His suicide is the ultimate expression of his confusion of success
with love and also of his belief in winning at all costs. As a father, he
overlooked Biff's small childhood acts of larceny - taking sand from a
building site, stealing basketballs, getting the answers for tests from the
nerdy, studious Bernard - and Biff has continued his habit into adulthood,
out of a combination of envy and revenge. A notebook citation reads, "It is
necessary to (1) reveal to Willy that Biff stole to queer himself, and did
it to hurt Willy," and "(2) And that he did it because of the Woman and all
the disillusionment it implied." In the final version of the play, Biff,
admitting in passing that he spent three months in a Kansas City jail for
lifting a suit, tells Willy, ''I stole myself out of every good job since
high school!" At first, Miller saw the twenty thousand dollars of insurance
money as cash to put Biff on the straight and narrow. "'My boy's a thief -
with 20,000 he'd stop it,' " he wrote in the notebook. Instead, Willy's
suicide - the final show of force and fraud, in keeping with his demented
competitive fantasies - is pitched on a more grandiose and perverse note. In
an early draft of the terrific penultimate scene, where Biff exposes Willy
and calls it quits with him and his dream, there is this exchange:
Biff (to him): What the hell do you want from me? What do you want from
me?
Willy: -Greatness-
Biff: No-
In Miller's final draft, Willy, who will not accept his son's confession
of thievery, takes Biff's greatness as a given as he visualizes his own
suicide. "Can you imagine that magnificence with twenty thousand dollars in
his pocket?" he says to Ben. He adds, "Imagine? When the mail comes he'll be
ahead of Bernard again." When he goes to his death, Willy, in his mind, is
on a football field with Biff, and full of vindictive triumph ("When you
hit, hit low and hit hard, because it's important, boy"). "He dies sending
his son through the goalposts," Miller says. "He dies moving." Miller
pauses. ''I think now that Kazan had it right from the beginning. He said,
'It's a love story.' "
On the last page of his notebook, Miller scribbled a short speech to give
to the original cast after its members had read the play in galleys: ''I
want you all to know now that the cannons are quiet that this production has
been the most gratifying I have known. I believe you are the finest ever
gathered for any play and I am exceedingly proud and gratified not only for
myself but for the American theatre." (The original cast included Lee J.
Cobb as Willy, with Mildred Dunnock, Arthur Kennedy, and Cameron Mitchell.)
In its passage to greatness, Death of a Salesman was enhanced enormously by
the poetic set design of Jo Mielziner, who created a series of platforms,
with Willy's house as a haunting omnipresent background. However, as Elia
Kazan pointed out in his autobiography, "The stage direction in the original
manuscript that Art gave me to read directly after he'd finished it does not
mention a home as a scenic element. It reads, ‘A pinpoint travelling spot
lights a small area on stage left. The Salesman is revealed. He takes out
his keys and opens an invisible door.' " Kazan continues, "It was a play
waiting for a directorial solution." It got it. Death of a Salesman" also
got its share of bad suggestions. Kazan's then wife, Molly Day Thacher, who
was a playreader for the Group Theatre and had some influence over Kazan,
tried to get Miller, as he remembers it, "to cut out Uncle Ben, all the
memory scenes, and simply make it a realistic little narrative." And the co-
producer, Kermit Bloomgarden, nervous of a play with Death in its title,
took a poll among theatregoers which asked, "Would you go to see a play
called Death of a Salesman?" Nobody would. "They had a list of about fifteen
titles," Miller says. "One was Free and Clear. I'll never forget that."
In the intervening half century, the surface of American life has
changed, but its mad competitiveness hasn't. "I'm not aware of any change in
the way people look at this play," Miller says, but he admits that Willy's
complaints about loyalty from the head office ring strange to contemporary
ears. "Workers now - not just workers but management - know that nobody will
have much pity for them." Last year, in a poll taken by the Royal National
Theatre of eight hundred English theatre professionals, Miller was voted the
greatest contemporary playwright; but in America, where in some quarters
he's seen as a kind of Jeremiah, Miller is not accorded quite the same
honor. He ascribes his decline in popularity to the erosion of the "unified
audience" that came with the rise of the avant-garde in the early sixties.
"The only theatre available to a playwright in the late forties was
Broadway," Miller writes in the fiftieth anniversary edition of Salesman.
"That theatre had one single audience . . . catering to very different
levels of age, culture, education, and intellectual sophistication." He
continues, "One result of this mix was the ideal, if not frequent
fulfillment, of a kind of play that would be complete rather than
fragmentary, an emotional rather than an intellectual experience, a play
basically of heart with its ulterior moral I gesture integrated with action
rather I than rhetoric. In fact, it was a Shakespearean ideal, a theatre for
anyone with an understanding of English and perhaps some common sense."
But there was nothing Shakespearean in the response to "that damned
disturbing play," as Kazan called it, on the night of its debut, February
10, 1949, in Philadelphia. "The curtain came down and nothing happened,"
Miller says. "People sat there a good two or three minutes, then somebody
stood up with his coat. Several men - I didn't see women doing this - were
helpless. They were sitting there with handkerchiefs over their faces. It
was like a funeral." He continues, "I didn't know whether the show was dead
or alive. The cast was back there wondering what had happened. Nobody'd
pulled the curtain up. Finally, someone thought to applaud, and then the
house came apart."
© 1999 The New Yorker, January 25, 1999
by John Lahr. Used with permission |